Oh, Dakota.

So my hero is Andrew Mcmahon, he amazes me an every single way. So here's the rough draft of the chorus. I thought of it in two minutes and scribbled it down, tell me what you think.

" Andrew, you're my hero, you're my hero, did you know?

You're my hero when it rains you're my hero when it snows.

  Andrew, you helped me, you helped me when I felt alone."

Now, it needs A LOT of work, like I said it's a rough draft. Personally I don't like it too much, what do you guys think? I really need you guys' opnions.

Holly's pov

I laughed as the rain started falling harder and harder. Haddix grabbed my hand and twirled me around, then pulled me closer and we started dancing. "This is now our spot." I said loudly, so he could hear me over the pouring rain. "Yeah, I guess it is." He smiled. I jumped when the thunder clapped. "Come on, we better get home, we need to think out a strategy." He said grabbing my hand. We started walking when a flash of lightning hit a tree. Haddix eye's flashed with fear and he quickened his pace.

When we made it home my mom was making dinner and humming a Fall Out Boy song. I smiled then followed Haddix to my room. He started pulling his wet hoodie and shirt off. I grabbed a tank top and shorts and went to change in my bathroom. I looked in…

Alexis's pov.

"What happened?" Jewel asked. "Some guy bumped into me. His voice sounded really familiar. But I didn't get a good look at him." I replied. "Too bad." She said. "Yeah, too bad." Damen chimed in. I grinned. "Oh my god, theres the stage! Ooh, Zack isn't wearing a shirt!" Damen exclaimed. "Calm down boy, and stop drooling." Jewel teased. I glanced up at the stage and saw the band getting ready. We walked closer to the stage. Surprisingly we were the only ones in the crowd. "Where is everyone?" Damen asked, looking around.

"I don't know." Jewel replied. Then I saw All Time Lows guitar tech, Danny Kurily, walking towards us. "Hey, Bad news, the show is canceled. Hey, You're the girl I bumped into." Danny said, stepping closer to me. "I am? Why's the show canceled?" I asked curiously. "Jack slipped on some…

Petes pov.

*2 months since the park meeting*

I was sitting on my bed talking to my girlfriend, breezy, on the phone. She was pissed at me. Again. She was angry because I told her I really didn't want to take her to the prom at the end of the year. I wanted to go. But not with her. Not really. She constanlty bitched at me and whined. "Breezy, What I'm trying to say is, it's over. I can't do it anymore. I'm really sorry." I told her, softly. "What!? You're breaking up with me? No one breaks up with me." She said, angrily. "Well I am." I said. "You're a loser anyway. I dated you because I felt sorry for you." She laughed. "Yeah? Well it's over. Bitch." I said, slamming my phone shut and throwing it against the wall.

 I screamed and punched…

Okay here it goes. (I suck at this!)

'I walk through life and see blurred colors. Images' of you like faint past lovers. It's amazing how one day you wake up and feel like you've lost everything. But in truth you've got it all.

You've got me.

You've got me.

"You've got everything.'

*Cringes* How bad was it!? It's my first 'song'. I'm not sure I like the chorus though.

So comment, tell me what you think!